Friday, July 13, 2018

Love Is The Air We Breathe Comments

Rating: 4.8

I won't tell you any word
That can bury you under the tears
I want to tell you of something
That you feel stronger to keep living
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Unwritten Soul
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Unwritten Soul. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dev Anand 15 November 2018

So hold on to yourself And God creates no one except with love And through love may you can see Though eye cant see....love is even in the breath. a fine love poem,

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 October 2018

Because love is the air we breathe Because love is shared in every beat And because differences between us are not to be a matter to fight. yes very true dear poetess. through love we can see......a very fine poem.. thank u.. tony

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Hans VR 22 September 2018

So true, my friend, it is truly all about love. One day I was praying for love, and I received the notion to just open my heart. It is truly in the air that we breathe, truly all around us and even in us. All we need to do is consciously breathe it in, let it into our heart, into our mind, into our soul. Wonderful poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2018

Because love is the air we breathe Because love is all we need to see - The poem ends with these two beautiful lines, that summarize the poem. An expression of love is always a nice sight to see.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 August 2018

nice very nice have you read MY MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TODAY Many have converted these two in ther dialect you also may kindly thanks in advance

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Muhammad Ali 04 August 2018

Great message in this simple poem. yes do accept nature and everyone with the possibility of diversity. nice poem

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Mj Lemon 30 July 2018

Soul, a great poem with a great title. I think our psyches inhale words and rants the way our lungs do inhale air. We need both the love and the oxygen to survive. We are corrupted when one becomes contaminated....and so love is the air we breathe. A great work, Soul.

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Dev Anand 26 July 2018

God creates no one except with love And through love may you can see Though eye cant see Be united is all we should be. you praise love that comes from God which unite all the lovers. dev

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

There is something within feeling that we feel deeply. Sometimes we do not express but feeling is well understood by others. Love has power to overcome emotion and tear. Sense of pain is felt and sense of hope is identified in love. Love is wonderful balm to heal pain of life. Because love is the air that we breath and love is shared in every beat. An excellent emotional poem is brilliantly penned. God's love empowers us always...10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 July 2018

Wow cool clever title eh! A compassionate lovely heartwarming poem. We all should learn from this. Thumbs up! And take care. Nice to read from your pen again, do add your thoughts/comment on my newest poem too titled, mirage surprise

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yoonoos peerbocus 13 July 2018

quite interesting piece/lovely

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2018

So i wont tell you any word/That can kill your smile/Because love is the air we breathe....an elegant piece of poetry! Loved reading it.....10

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