Love is Strange
Love is a strange leap to the unknown
No one knows where it would culminate
It is not a choice where one would thrown
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a few things, English-wise, strike me in your poem as 'not quite how 'bri' would write it'. ha! but i assume English is not your 'first' language; you do very well with it however! ;) but here i believe is a line with a typo [i make typos too! ]: And sailing to destination my be difficult (to be continued) ............
Indeed love is like taking a big leap! No one can predict were we would land, yet there is a lot off thrill in it! Beautifully put!
(continued) ....At times so clear and at times but all blur..........i suggest at times all but a blur i've had several marriages in which love was, at times, all but a blur. if i say to my wife now I love you, she sometimes says Are you sure? . often she says NOTHING! HA HA. Love is indeed Strange! ! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)