Love Is Rare Comments

Sabeen Rashid likes this. Sabeen Rashid That was quite a scorcher! ! Almost set my wall ablaze. It's a beautiful poem, buddy! ! The passion, the romance, the intensity were all there. Kept the sparks flying. Oh yes! The love of your life came across as someone very strong-willed and so much in control. No wonder you fell for her hook, line and sinker! 33 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

Shehzar Doja the first two stanzas really caught my eye..as did the last stanza..for me it began with a surreal flow, not rhyming but the idea was powerful enough to sort of carry it on its own strenght but as the third stanza and the rhyming began, to me it felt as if the ether landscape was lost and it became a cheap attempt to get there..like being high then sobering up..even though it rhymed, the flow and continuity of thought did not permeate quite as exquisite..and yet all the tools and ideas were all there in the words. It is you and you alone Master of own destiny and queen I am bit late on the scene Yet it is celebration all over and seen ((these last two lines for example feels forced to rhyme) as opposed to Where words fail Eyes enter and avail All chances to contact Attract and fully act(wonderful rhyme here) What has flowed in between? Pure sea of waves unseen She whispers from distance I seize it at once what i loved about the first two stanzas is that they were different..the last line of stanza one had a triple rhyme(at, tract, act) wheras the ending of stanza 2 reveled in being able to give the reader a pause in the rhyme to take it in differently and reflect on the words... i love this poem for what it could have been but after that, the rhyming was again to reiterate, felt cheaply forced.. a pity to me because everything is there in the poem itself.... hope you do not take offense, just my opinion. 17 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

Heather Burns excellent about an hour ago · Like

prasad bolimeru nice...

julie wow..nice thank you friend

leafsailor Yes, live with love as your guide a fine poem my friend

Elizabeth Squires the sentiments expressed in this piece speak straight to the heart. An exceptional poem. Thanks for sharing.

Love is rare Always dare It is like place in heaven Though not possible even