Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Thursday, November 22, 2012

Love Is Precious Than Money Comments

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Open your heart's door baby
Read my mind recognize me
Please don't say no; let it be
You won't regret I am he
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Asif Andalib
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Theodore Tilmoth 01 December 2012

it is so splendid.............keep writing!

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Anita Sehgal 25 November 2012

lovely romantic .. enjoyed!

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Onyeme John 23 November 2012

Love is sweeter than honey, Worthful than money....nice poem Asif, keep writing.

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Virginia Pecho Gely 23 November 2012

What a declaration of the purest sentiment that is L O V E. I saw in a commentary once, that if you read the word the other way around, it will read EVOL. Yes love helps us to evolve. Your pen is a real feast to the senses, to the mind and most specially to the heart, Asif. Please don't mind negative comments. Please write as you feel....The results are just so profound and true. Thank you for sharing and continue to write your deep and personal thoughts. Virginia

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Hazel Durham 23 November 2012

Wonderful poem about your great love and passion, so beautifully written, thanks for sharing!

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Wilfred Mellers 23 November 2012

Your poem is pretty good. The only thing I would have added was a bit more Imagery. Other than that, it is really good and I like it. Keep up the good work. I really don't qualify to judge other peoples work for I am not a poet or a critic. I am just somebody that writes down what I am feeling at the time. I live inside my head so that flows to the hands and ends up on paper, computer that is. Your words are real and from the heart and that my friends is the only thing that matters. Commit pen to paper and write on.

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Red O'mara 23 November 2012

Please don't say no, let it be, you won't regret, I am he. Well written, Asif.

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Aung Si 23 November 2012

I'll make your heart full of glee Fun, mirth, peace and harmony Wow! u know, how great it is! the last word of every lines are rhyming.well done! this is 10.

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Ernest Makuakua 23 November 2012

Good stuff bra. Keep going. I like it

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2012

Again, you crafting a very nice poem, a romanticos poetry_Soul

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Erika Wingo 23 November 2012

So many people never realize how true that is. This is wonderfully expressed.. I love the line, Read my mind, recognize me Keep up the good work Asif! '

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Dilstefny Dd 23 November 2012

Hmm super.I like it. Your poem is simply superb.

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Sarada Panda 23 November 2012

simple and rythmic.............

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Ajaegbu Charles 23 November 2012

its good to remind those we love that wealth and riches can't buy true... I love your poem.

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Marieta Maglas 22 November 2012

you expressed here your opinion about love and money-thank you for sharing your idea...........

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 22 November 2012

Nothing replace the the power of love-love is power over all. Love your poem.

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Angel Plant 22 November 2012

I love it. It is beautiful and amazing. I will tead them all. I enjoyed it.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 22 November 2012

Materials, wealth, money, they are nothing in front of the power of love in my opinions. love is a gift from the mere light, and that mere light is God. Well done.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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