Sunday, February 17, 2019

Love Is My Plea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowly and silently the bare footed mule turned out the stars,
The naughty moon peeping in through the friendly curtains,
Started singing a song advising to heel up the cold scars,
The weather turned sexy, it excites, invites and entertains.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

Ignore one who is calling for the prayers, love is my plea... Bold and beautiful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 February 2019

What a wonderful imaginative write. Nature at its best. So beautifully written.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 February 2019

What a romantic personification of a wet weather.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 February 2019

NOW I C HOW DIFFERENT LOOK YE AFTER THE RAINS IN THIS NEW PICTURE PLANTED NOW BY THEE JA JI SIR

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 February 2019

The weather turned sexy, it excites, invites and entertains. miracle a dry crotch sprung two flowers! Teen aged clouds spread(XXXXa) wine on the cracks of the earth A fine mild rain just before the dawn, a rose I can see, Ignore one who is calling for the prayers, love is my plea. REALTO LOVELY IMAGERY I PICKED UP FROM THE RAINS FOR THEE JA ji

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Akhtar Jawad 17 February 2019

Today when I was going for the dawn prayers prior to dawn I noticed everything was wet in Karachi.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 February 2019

Is the same sweetheart is back, I have already deleted the second " is" from this line. Thanks to the friends who pointed out.

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