Monday, April 2, 2018

Love Is Like That Comments

Rating: 5.0

I close my eyes,
I see you there
Not only there
But Everywhere,
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Sandra Feldman
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Laquory Jones 02 April 2018

Great work Sandra. Love is sometimes hard to describe but you have found a way +10

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George Krokos 02 April 2018

What you've written about is universally known to be true particularly in the second verse. It would have been better technically speaking, as far as the meter in the poem goes, for it to have remained consistent in the 3rd & 4th lines of the last verse. Otherwise a good write.

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