I close my eyes,
I see you there
Not only there
But Everywhere,
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What you've written about is universally known to be true particularly in the second verse. It would have been better technically speaking, as far as the meter in the poem goes, for it to have remained consistent in the 3rd & 4th lines of the last verse. Otherwise a good write.
Great work Sandra. Love is sometimes hard to describe but you have found a way +10