Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Friday, November 23, 2012

Love Is Like Prophet Solomon's Ring Comments

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Throughout my life I would like to sing
Give me a little bit love darling
When you love me I feel like a king
Love is such a wonderful feeling
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 23 November 2012

Very beautiful construction of thought, to be loved to be like a king with the ring as in Solomon's. Very passionate way of dealing with the message of love and building it up to a final conclusion with the use of the title. Very good coherence.

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Linda May Fox 23 November 2012

Lovely poem which speaks truth. I like your imagery and your exact rhyming couplets all the way through. Loved reading it. I invite you to read some of my poems!

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Marina B 23 November 2012

I really like this. Your message is clear, your view is hard to argue (for it is the truth) , the imagery is beautiful, and the comparisons are lovely. Most important thing is that it all makes sense. Great job!

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Kelvin Owusu 23 November 2012

a nice warmth love is a strong thing what connects us all

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Sallam Yassin 23 November 2012

A fine fruit of love as the tree as her fruit the man is the fruit of his heart

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Hazel Durham 23 November 2012

This is so true, we need love so much in our lives, this poem has amazing lines, very inspired write! !

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Vishal Sharma 23 November 2012

romantic scenes.. praiseworthy check mine too

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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