Throughout my life I would like to sing
Give me a little bit love darling
When you love me I feel like a king
Love is such a wonderful feeling
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Lovely poem which speaks truth. I like your imagery and your exact rhyming couplets all the way through. Loved reading it. I invite you to read some of my poems!
I really like this. Your message is clear, your view is hard to argue (for it is the truth) , the imagery is beautiful, and the comparisons are lovely. Most important thing is that it all makes sense. Great job!
A fine fruit of love as the tree as her fruit the man is the fruit of his heart
This is so true, we need love so much in our lives, this poem has amazing lines, very inspired write! !
Very beautiful construction of thought, to be loved to be like a king with the ring as in Solomon's. Very passionate way of dealing with the message of love and building it up to a final conclusion with the use of the title. Very good coherence.