Love is like a rose,
with gentle tender parts,
Slowly it unfolds,
And develops in your heart,
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I like this one very much... this is more than teenage angst. Full marks from me!
A beautifully written metaphor and that's something to say since a rose and love have been used as metaphors by many poets and writers. Yours was exceptional...and you're only 17 years old! Awesome.
Very nice. I loved it. I can see the symbolism that you wrote about.
Lovely! ! That's my favorite! !