Tuesday, December 18, 2018

Love Is In My Blood And Love Is My Life. Comments

Rating: 4.2

They say I am madly in love
But when I see the mirror
I see my face not of my beloved
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 July 2020

As you write this loving and caring verse, I would say in my Dutch tongue: " Met een korreltje zout nemen" BUT don't start translating into English, since the Dutch idiom cannot be translated and too bad, my comment for your poem, cannot be translated either, but this is my comment. I really enjoyed your free verse, that's one thing for sure, and it's so alluring!

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Deepak S S 27 December 2018

Great poem, a profound statement.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 December 2018

A poem of devotion for the beloved who seems none other but God

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Valsa George 19 December 2018

You are not hood winked by love! You are also not a slave to passions! Love for the beloved needn't leave you astray! Love is a guiding force. True love is never based on hot impulses! Continue to be level headed and allow love to stimulate you in a healthy way! A beautiful and sensible write! A sure 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 December 2018

To stand upright! ! ! With the muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 19 December 2018

Thank u so much my Friend Edward

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 December 2018

There is a sad tune to the poem. A very nice poem on how the poet is waiting for his lover to understand his feelings. Flowing smoothly it touches the heart.

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M Asim Nehal 19 December 2018

Thank u so much Anil ji

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2018

Lovely poem! Fascinating last stanza!

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M Asim Nehal 19 December 2018

Thank u so much Dillipji

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2018

Love is a beautiful mirror that has tender reflection. Love beautifies mind and attitude. Making life in love is really great. An interesting poem is excellently penned...10

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M Asim Nehal 19 December 2018

Thank u so much Kumarmaniji.

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