Monday, April 20, 2009

Love Is How You Use A Pencil Comments

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love is how you use a pencil
there was a giant sky scrapper, on the outside of the building leading up the front were two outdoor elevators parallel to one another. with no entrance to the building from the sidewalk, the only way in was through one of the elevators. You were there, along with us a group of our friends. The ambience was dynamic as we all packed into one of the elevators, and road up. Once we were on, all of you around me became opulent and cordial. My feel wasn’t as warm, it was more of an apathetic tentativeness of anticipation for something, who knows.
when we arrived to the top, I found myself alone, I have been riding the other elevator. I watched the rest of you get off, walk into black, with a resonance from laughter and conversation as the rest of you vanished through the shadows of the hall.
“Well I’ll just catch up with them.” I said to myself.
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

great write.. well done truly a poem to read

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