Anger is darkness of a mans
soul, it swallows you whole,
it consumes your life, it brings
forth pain, it brings forth misery.
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I like how you rhyme or have some type of rhythm throughout the poem. I like the visualization as well throughout it, I mean, anger is always sinking deep into a mans soul.
I like the charisma that you put into your poetry. Your poem also shows a very positive attitude that I admire. Please check out my poems sometime!
Love is what we shall keep(: <3