Monday, January 30, 2012

Love Is 'Essential' Comments

Rating: 4.5

I ask myself
do I love her?
I ask myself
can I love her?
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kuzo freak
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Alex Lees 05 February 2012

Hey great job on this poem but you will need a little more puncuation to help it flow a lttle better.

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Dave Walker 30 January 2012

A great poem, like it. A great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Evil Rising.

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