You are not a person, my dear
You are a Presence, present Everywhere.
Little dusts can blur my vision, or I may close my eyes, (but) -
Light never changes it's place.
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Wonderfully written. a source of inspiration to become more spiritual.
Beautiful rendition of words from the heart. A lovely piece of poetry elegantly brought forth with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
You are a Presence, present Everywhere. You are in me. i always noted that you are mystical. you prove it again in this poem dear poetess. God bless you. tony
A sense of Biblical majesty, simplicity and familiarity- with modern believability.
You are not a person, my dear/You are a presence, present Everywhere....sublime expression! A beautiful poem.............................................10
You are not a person, my dear You are a Presence, present Everywhere. Little dusts can blur my vision, or I may close my eyes, (but) - Light never changes it's place.
Call it Biblical or mythological, this poem has in it a classic touch. The presence of an overwhelming reader' response is an evidence of its profundity. This can never be called a foolish effort. Thanks for sharing. It goes into MyPoemList. I quote from the poem: You are a Presence, present Everywhere. My searching becomes an obstacle.
Radhakrishna, Adam and Eve, Jodha Akbar... The poem brought all great love stories to my mind
You are a Presence, present Everywhere. you are in as me........ sooo true. your wisdom is very very spiritual and flows down from a philosophy that leads the reader to God. thank u. tony
Thank you Dr. Tony Brahmin for such a inspirational comment..whomever we Love it leads us to God.. Divinity dwells in every heart..
I am amazed by your poet's notes: ''My Divine Root, My Celestial Shelter, My Adam, My Master, My God....'' - I love it! A wonderful poem with wonderful poet's notes! Keep on posting!
Here I can see the expression of deep love differently. The poem may be on god or lover whomsoever it may be but It has the depth of ocean.... 10 + rated