Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Love Is Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just because I tell you that I love you
Doesn't mean that you have to love me too
Even if i'm the first to say these words to you
Don't be compelled to say them too
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Omar Ali Sabar
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Captain Herbert Poetry 28 April 2014

Powerfully wonderful. I like this so much. EXCELLENT Kindly comment on my poems. Thank you very much

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Kali Abyss 09 April 2012

Definetly another favorite =)

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a well expressed poem...loved this ending..10+++ And on that day when you pass by my grave when my soul is burning inside remember it's your soul that i tried to save say a prayer for me and walk on by Just pray for me and walk on by

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Jo Le 18 January 2009

very well written omar. I liked this one :)

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 December 2008

Yes sign of true love is sacrifice.............. Good write..............

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Sid John Gardner. 20 December 2008

Nice one Omar, Seem to remember a similar one written by Robert Frost....and myself.Great theme and heart felt. Sid.

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Jo Le 19 December 2008

Thanks for commenting on my poem. I really liked this poem, very deep, and also so true sometimes. wonderfully written

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Linda Moore 13 December 2008

Very Nice writing, to love and not have it returned but still to wish the best is Love......10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 December 2008

Well Omar, you say that Love is Death but I say ' Love is the intervening space between life and death '.

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

ahh i can see the pain in your lines......great work....nice ending....thanks for sharing....sebastine....

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Subbaraman N V 06 December 2008

Mutual love indeed is divine love!

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Peter Vealey 06 November 2008

A while back you asked me to comment on your work, i have voted today and especially liked 'Love is death' and also flags and rags. Have you many other poems on here. My book 'With authentic stains, a poetry paperback is out with Chipmunka- 49 poems, available online at Amazon about love, loss, addiction from September 2008. You can sample it too online, they are different poems to what i have on poemhunter.com Best Wishes, hope to hear from you. Peter.

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Little Hatila ;) 03 November 2008

'Even if I tell you that i'd die for you don't feel that you have to die for me too' you are right they don't have to die for you but at least they must have some pity for you..... well done...i loved it...10 Hataw

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Ershad Mazumder 21 October 2008

If you want to die, fall in love. Destiny of love is death. really a very good piece.

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James B. Earley 15 September 2008

A poignant message of introspection......and perhaps......wisdom!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

Love is the theme, nice composition, like it.

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sara }i{ 05 September 2008

new type of love, but i luv it

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Estrella Baldemosa 05 September 2008

unselfish love...i am in awe!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 September 2008

A different type of lovely poem.

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Anna jonson 01 September 2008

very good.. wowwwwwww your words are well chosen

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Omar Ali Sabar

Omar Ali Sabar

Bellshill, Scotland
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