Just because I tell you that I love you
Doesn't mean that you have to love me too
Even if i'm the first to say these words to you
Don't be compelled to say them too
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a well expressed poem...loved this ending..10+++ And on that day when you pass by my grave when my soul is burning inside remember it's your soul that i tried to save say a prayer for me and walk on by Just pray for me and walk on by
Yes sign of true love is sacrifice.............. Good write..............
Nice one Omar, Seem to remember a similar one written by Robert Frost....and myself.Great theme and heart felt. Sid.
Thanks for commenting on my poem. I really liked this poem, very deep, and also so true sometimes. wonderfully written
Very Nice writing, to love and not have it returned but still to wish the best is Love......10
Well Omar, you say that Love is Death but I say ' Love is the intervening space between life and death '.
ahh i can see the pain in your lines......great work....nice ending....thanks for sharing....sebastine....
A while back you asked me to comment on your work, i have voted today and especially liked 'Love is death' and also flags and rags. Have you many other poems on here. My book 'With authentic stains, a poetry paperback is out with Chipmunka- 49 poems, available online at Amazon about love, loss, addiction from September 2008. You can sample it too online, they are different poems to what i have on poemhunter.com Best Wishes, hope to hear from you. Peter.
'Even if I tell you that i'd die for you don't feel that you have to die for me too' you are right they don't have to die for you but at least they must have some pity for you..... well done...i loved it...10 Hataw
If you want to die, fall in love. Destiny of love is death. really a very good piece.
A poignant message of introspection......and perhaps......wisdom!
Powerfully wonderful. I like this so much. EXCELLENT Kindly comment on my poems. Thank you very much