Love Is Commotion Comments

this is an amazing poem. very different from the many i have read here. intense, and structured. it has a hauntingh feel about it. 'As day fades into day and night barks into night, ' loved this line. thank you so much.

Hey Ankita.....i read this poem not just once...but three times to get the full essence of it.....interestingly this aspect of love has been rarely poeticised.....well it feels good to be the first one....good luck...i like ur work.