Have you ever known it by a differant name, than
the name that we call love?
Could you prey upon that special one the one you
said you loved.
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1 - James, I'm glad to read a recent poem by you! And i'm glad to report i only found two 'typos', ...found in the last three words, assuming you meant " road is" /road's, not 'roads', and " too" , not 'to'. I'll give you a pass on them....THIS TIME. cont.
2 - No, I've never " known it by a differant name, than the name that we call love? " oops! i NOW see " differant" , not different. i missed it earlier. :) I think the last line is good advice! But, if love 'turns its back on me', i tend to walk in the opposite direction. to MyPoemList I wish you well. bri ;)