Sunday, March 25, 2012

Love Is At Threat Comments

Rating: 4.8

To be very close to your chest
Once I became a book
But after the test and examination
You kept me safe in the shelf
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 03 November 2012

the similies in this poem are excellent. each quatrain is a story within it self. I adore this poem full of thoughtful wisdom. After reading I am inclined to beieve love is a threat. I would not indulge many times.

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Savita Tyagi 24 May 2012

Beautiful poem. Aching love presented with such tenderness. Loved it.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 25 March 2012

great poem with in-depth wisdom :) To lift up your soul And to heal your heart Once I become the light You needed me too much at night But at day you threw me out. Wonderful!

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Romeo Della Valle 25 March 2012

Wow! My dear friend! What a deep and touching write that really is thought provoking! Love is a At Threat for someone afraid to open the door of a World of Discovery! There is not a perfect blind person than the one that doesn't want to see! Well done write! I love it! One of my favorite! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! I admire your great talent and wisdom! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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