I held thy hand
And far I wanted to go
How sweet is young love
I very well know
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I don't think you were really in love. If you were, you would not have left him. But everyone does take things differently and there are some who are not ready for that big a sacrifice. In view of this you probably did the right thing The poem is very well written. It describes the situation clearly and sincerely. So glad to see you get the honor of its being chosen as Poem of the Day. I am sure there will be many more excellent poems to come! We'll be looking forward to them.
A fair argument Sandra, and like you said, sometimes people are not ready to make sacrifices in life especially for someone else.
Thank you for showering so much appreciation on my poems. With such heart warming comments from readers like you, how can anybody stop!
Life moved on/Another girl, you decided to marry/And I found my husband in Harry....Wonderful expression! A beautiful poem! Manny congratulations! ! Full marks
A beautiful life song with its ups and downs and at times meaningful compromise. Congrats on poem of the day.
Human beings are discontent with what in hand and seek for a bird in the bush and realises that the bird in hand was better. The process creates confessions, regrets apology and the like. But y the time its almost dusk. Congrats being POD
A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. Congratulations, Chandini for a truly deserved accolade.
Thank you ma'am; your thoughtful words have always encouraged me to write more.
Alas! ! ! I gave up on you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A heart touching incident really. You have inked it in a very subtle manner that makes an interesting reading. Deserved to be poem of the day.
Life moved on Another girl, you decided to marry And I found my husband in Harry Compunction, still sometimes makes me melancholy Whilst you have recovered and are all jolly .......//// superb poem penned really, congrats for being selected this poem as POD
love is all you wherever I go whenever love is all you in dreaming, sleeping, awaken love is all you only seeks for my life
Multi-tasking is not easy in a relationship, so it was better to move on to somebody else. 'Love is all that you seek' applies to most of us, whether we are successful or not.
A magnificent story.So heart rending. Very touching lines that pinch the heart. Liked the ultimate stanza. It conveys a moral lesson in life that a reader must put to heart. Beautifully written and conveyed, Chandini. Enjoyed reading it.
CONGRATS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day last 25 Nov 2019. I have come across this and noticed that I haven't put my felicitations here. I have enjoyed very much, Chandini. Such loveliest poem created. A 10 Topscore. Keep writing, Chandini. Thank you for sharing.
My thanks and appreciation for your kind words ma'am. Coming from you, it means a lot.