Thursday, September 15, 2016

Love Is Acknowledged By Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fairy comes to her grandfather old,
Turns silver of hairs in glittering gold,
Combs with fingers, a reliever of pain,
And when her magic enters the brain,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2016

Silver hair is glittering gold. Time turns and old age comes and such appearance acquires moment. Acknowledging heart's whisper we feel love all around us. Granddaughter loves to hear fairy tale from grandfather and likes to hear song of Dove. Very interesting and lovable poem this is. Having nice image with granddaughter delights this poem more. EXCELLENT! ...10

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Kelly Kurt 16 September 2016

A simply marvelous and beautiful poem. The photo is great. Are you getting younger, Akhtar?

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Nosheen Irfan 16 September 2016

This is so beautiful. What a lovely poem for your granddaughter accompanied by a beautiful graphic. Children can inspire us to heights of poetic finesse.

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Tammy Hendrix 15 September 2016

Oh how lovely! Our little ones inspire us to heights of great expressions. No doubt your granddaughter knows well just how much she is loved. This is charming and sweet. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings.

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