Love Is A Tide Of Waves Comments

As the mesmerized moon Forgets to rise Above the zenith Lip locked with the white Rising tides in the horizon. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the sharing of this nicely written poem

wow loved this, and the final lines 'Lip locked with the white Rising tides in the horizon' evokes the passions of a hot wind next to the sand on the shores of the sea

As the evening sky Pregnant with the dozing Sun, Licks the naughty Shores, With the tongue of The wicked sea breeze Touches sensually Deep under the Blanket of shy virgin skin, Nice poem.10 out of 10.

Pregnant with the dozing sun! ! Nice piece of work.

Feasting the sensual feel, life is a mixture, salt and pepper is needed, keep spicing up, thanks