Tuesday, July 8, 2014

Love Is A Rose Comments

Rating: 2.5

Love is a Rose that blooms
With open arms she welcomes the sun
She arises with early beauty at the wake of dawn
She yawns, stretching her body young and free
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Cheryl Griffith
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2014

Imagery is good in this poem. Rhythm has been thrown off by misspelled words and wrong tenses. Poem is disjointed somewhat because of it. Good thoughts and ideas though. I am partial to roses! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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* Sunprincess * 08 July 2014

..........truly a most beautiful poem....a rose is a special flower...and a perfect example, why we need to care for the earth....

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Cheryl Griffith

Cheryl Griffith

San Fernando Trinidad and Tobago
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