Saturday, June 12, 2010

Love Is A Jester Comments

Rating: 4.8

Love is not patient and love is not kind
Love is a jester, and he binds your mind
He tricks and deceives you with well honed skill
Once you beleive him your soul he does kill
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David Hayes
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Logan S 21 June 2010

All writing below are great highlights of the poem. I always when people personify emotions and feelings. Always turns into creative writing.

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Leila Mass 18 June 2010

I love these types of poems. The personification ones that sometimes surprise you like most people wouldn't think this would be a poem about how love can be bad. Interesting and I like it.

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Jess Silva 17 June 2010

David I really like this poem, it speaks to me simply because I have written my own poem that is similiar, love is the hunter. And I think it is perfect, it sums up a lot of how love can sometimes feel.

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Gita Ashok 16 June 2010

A very creative composition on a very common topic - love. Now how about writing one more glorifying love?

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