When I'm in love
I feel locked in a cage
I place you above
everything and I feel rage.
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i love this poem, it seem you studied my heart before writting this poem to be sincere with you i fell in love with a girl who does not seem to reciprocate my guesture but i'm glad because this poem of yours will go a long way to let her how much i love her and she in return has thrown me into a traumatic condition.thank God you did. Cece you have done a great job. keep it up.
CeCe I know where you're coming from, the frustration is obvious. May I make a suggestion and please don't be offended. Rewrite iin free verse, the constant rhyming detracts your message...
cece this poem is ur best and i have got to add it to my favourite cos i need to tell a friend about it.lovely keep typing