What is love, Love can't see you but you can't see it
Love is a sneaky thing I guess sort of slick
Love can hurt and Love can heal
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I do agree with you, dear Daniel. Love has many faces and many functions, can be described in many ways but at the end of your verses you affirm that real love comes only from above. For me the life of Jesus defines what is real love. Thank you so much for posting this.
Defination of love: the usage of opposite i.e. Good or bad makes poem interesting an lively. Nice enough to add to my favorite poems
I kuv your poem keep up the good work touch my heart because im in LOVE
love this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! thats so true, only real love is love from above... God Bless ya for the awesome poem
i liked this poem, simple and very well described. check out my love poem and tell me what you think.
oh my gosh i freeking luv ur anologys I luv ur poem! nice thoughts
I love the way you write what love is throughout the poem, and then at the last verse, you write of not knowing where love is I love the way it all comes together and how love cannot be found by those who are looking for it
I agree the last two lines are nice but with out them it leaves you in thought...and with hope. The last to lines finish or complete the poem not leaving it to live with-in ones mind. Great job!
I do really like this poem a lot. But if I could make a suggestion that you don't take personally. I think that you might want to dropp the last two lines, because I feel as if it doesn't quite fit, and if you left it with out the last two lines, I believe it would flow better. Only a suggestion though.
Hi Daniel, I loved your poem :)