Is that a Love poem?
Let me write you one
Mine is from the heart
No clever words spun
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You want true love it all boils down to Is that person making You a better you. That is what I feel true love.I passionately enjoy style and Brave expression mam.Nicely crafted.Thanks for brevity in sharing. Binaya
Thank you, I always believe you have to bring out the best in each other.
'Is that person making You a bettter You? ' - Yes, when you are in love, you usually area better person. Love cleanses your heart. Nice poem. There are three 't's in 'better'. You may like to chop off one! :)
Thank you, but I'll leave that typo, you have to love the person and all their flaws, mine is bad spelling.
I am totally submerged in the poem nicely crafted mam. you may read and comment on my poem Love. Thanks. Binaya
Truer words were never spoken! When I was going through my spiral notebook which contained the most recent poems I've posted, I found something I'd written on 5th October,2013. Because it so perfectly lines up with the last 2 lines of your poem, I will share it here: 'Different people have the ability to bring out different things in you, to influence your personality and character. As long as what they're bringing out in you, and the direction you're growing in, is GOOD and not BAD, then the relationship is worth keeping. ' In other words, if you don't like what you are becoming under someone's influence, then maybe it's time to leave. Very good poem.
Yet it wounds to kill! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
thought provoking, but very true well done Hannah, lovely poem.
Love is beautiful and this gives magical thrill. Love makes a person better. We inherit love from God is eternal. God's love for us is continuous and infinite. Very thoughtful and interesting poem is beautifully presented....rating 10...Welcoming to PoemHunter.
A lovely poem Hannah.. person making you a better you, very true, that's love
A great start with a nice poem, Hannah. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.
Hi Frances, Welcome back, nice to see you on ph. Lovely poem on the true love. True love needs no clever words, Images of nature, Magic or the thrill to convey the feelings. Yet, the wounds of love are so soothing; the pain so enjoyable. Lovely poem. A 100++