Tuesday, September 15, 2020

Love Is - 2 Comments

Rating: 4.9

Love Is
Like a strawberry Ice-cream,
That melts your pink heart,
But warms the chilled mind,
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Interesting image! Love is delicious!

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Shruti Verman 26 September 2020

This picture of ice-cream is so delicious! My favourite line - " But warms the chilled mind" .. so apt!

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Indira Renganathan 23 September 2020

Nobody has written like this on love so far....you win....very interesting write..many many stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2020

The wonders and effect of love on one's heart and mind is vividly depicted on this short lovely poem. Beautifully crafted. Great metaphor and images..

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 September 2020

good image of love depicted

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Bri Edwards 17 September 2020

I've had other body parts tied, but never my tongue! a nice little love poem. but i prefer (and am better at writing) humor, , and....do you know? actually a poem including humor, , AND ice cream...would be perfect. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 September 2020

i can 'speak to'** the effect of ice cream on my 'heart' and 'mind': i get fantastic effect(s) ! ! ** i mean i can 'address the subject of'. mention of " oodles" makes me think: someone should make ice cream-flavored noodles. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2020

A great metaphorical poem on love and life is astutely delineated by you dear Dr Geeta madam. I remember thr glory of childhood when we were eating ice cream in group saying yum yum. According to your pen Love is more sweeter than oodles and oodles of sweet yum yum cream! Beautiful poem with attractive graphic.10

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Rajnish Manga 15 September 2020

Truly fantastic. Love need not be a serious business all the time. This poem shows us that there is a small child in everyone of us which loves to remain a child and makes its presence felt once in a while. Thanks, Geeta ji, for placing on record such innocence in this love poem of a different kind.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 September 2020

wow how wonderfully expressed about the love.....Love is always love as beautiful as we express it beautifully

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Varsha M 15 September 2020

And my heart is craving this pink strawberry delicious yummy creamy chilling. 😋

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