One night, I knocked your door
You opened welcoming me
We had tea and some spaghetti
We talked, fact-finding, no more
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awesome insight into relationships and its reality, like to share my regards for giving the best work thanks sir
Wow! How beautifully you've illustrated this thing called relationships. The fear of risking, yet braving through and discovering the greatest gift of all...LOVE. Paul, congratulations on Poem Of The Day! Very Well Deserved!
Congratulations for the well deserved poem of the day Paul. I guess fear prevents us from exposing our real feelings. Fear of our feelings not being reciprocal and that it may ruin a good friendship is right up there with not being able to open up to another person due to fear of being hurt or disappointed. An interesting write from start to finish. Thank you Paul.
You thought well and you wrote well. Thank you for sharing with us.
The last stanza is meaningful. True love never changes like weather and remains sublime forever. Very nice and congrats.
Love requires vulnerability. And patience is truly a necessity. Very nicely done, and congratulations on poem of the day!
It is a good message of patience in finding your way to love. Very well written, Paul.
Such a positive, beautiful poem. The words are so very encouraging. Thank you. For penning this together
Love is intricately weaved Through gentleness and kindness Through patience and forgiveness Unconditional love breeds Love, endures weather of life Love is to last life long Love lives life beyond Intimacy keeps love-life alive....perfect words on love...a good definition....indeed a fine love poem- 10++++
Thank you. Each of us is writing a page of our life for others to write theirs. You are one!
A beautiful love poem Paul.Congratulations on being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Being real, you cannot be unreal Trusting someone is a choice To love someone is a choice Gift of oneself is a choice Happiness path is a choice - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A beautiful poem on love, almost every body can relate to it. Love is the very essence of life.Trust is the core around which a loving relationship flourish. Congratulations for being Poet of the Day.
This is a good write.Pulling feelings out of abstract zone and placing them up front…. I Love it.Well done and good choice for today's poem….Geoffrey.
This poem reminds me of the song ENDLESS LOVE popularized by LIONEL RICHIE AND DIANA ROSS..... Congrats on being selected for the day......
A nicely penned poem, the silent love through gentleness and kindness, through patience and forgiveness effectively elucidated.
More than love, it is the intimacy which keeps the love-life keep going. Not only love-life, but every sphere of life. Love may be peripheral but intimacy is the core. But for this line, the poem would have fallen to just another love poem among the lot. Nice to have been selected as the poem of the day.
An intimate relationship viewed through a spiritually molded mind, without being a prey of sadistic feelings. Congrats for being the members PoD. X
Love is giving..to love one gives completely. Trusting completely.