Saturday, January 6, 2007

Love In Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Winter cannot chill my ardent soul
Nor forest entrapped by icy glaze
Her smile is what makes me whole
Eyes that set my racing heart ablaze
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Ray Lucero
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Lucianne Fasolo 02 October 2007

I just came across this one by chance, lol. Simply beautiful, it sounds like all the love sonnets I've read mixed in one. Wonderful work! : D

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Patricia Gale 06 January 2007

Such a beautiful sonnet, the first stanza takes it all.... well penned Ray!

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