Sunday, May 22, 2016

Love In Two Languages Comments

Rating: 4.8

My eternal love for you,
Alone will always
Ignite a fire that
No one can extinguish
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Kristina Lybbert
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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2017

Beautiful depiction of love ❤ as a voyage of bliss, and a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. Lovely poem nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 22 May 2016

My never ending, Eternal love for you Ignites a fire that No one can extinguish Together we can Endure any challenge, Navigating through any Unexpected event Planning for all the Years to come, Arguing over what's Right and wrong Kissing you softly Arousing the mood, Rhythm of the music Drumming for our love I love you, And I always will Got the message underneath, Main Tenu Pyar Kardi.. You can write like the poet Subhas Chandra Chakra too. He also writes letters through the initials of his poems. It was an ancient trend in Great Indian poets to write great poems in this style, as you have done. Thanks dear for it.10 marks for this poem.

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