Love In Tomb Poem by Prabir Gayen

Love In Tomb

Rating: 5.0


Love in tomb
(G S- 5)
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Plume, tiara, dendrobium,
rose and incense from censor cold,
curl through foggy trunk beside
a pond, a deserted grove.
In endless rest and nature's elemental affinity,
Aminasleeps with arms fold.
Oppressed mind and deathless rest underground, once childhood
love did she nurture.
With frozen mind and body
bent with timeSimon,
a silent devout was cleaving passage for candle.
Sixteenth birthday day of Amina and roving
the grave he poured absinthe for absolution.
Mumblesome incoherentwordsabstruse and swaggering ingenuity the spurned lover spurred the flame.
Spurious might seem,
he called her name and
In filthy squalid place
a conversation squealed Squirming
a new invention.
Childhood dreams of happy memories andthe hope of getting married and separation.
Brokenheart she went tiptoe to his stablemate.
The night she wore her bridal gown,
and Britpop played
and she committed suicide
to stop livingthe life of abomination.
Silencedawned suddenly on his heartand soul seemed sealed with songunheard.
With smiling face he laid onthe tomband like adaisy with Amina he chained.

Sunday, January 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Srijita Mondal 30 January 2019

Nicely written poem.. imaginative and thought provoking

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Rajnish Manga 29 January 2019

This appears to be a narrative from a real life tragedy which reminds us that things may not be as rosy as they seen in the beginning. It is, in a way, a very thoughtful commentary on the complexity of human relationships. once childhood.... love did she nurture. and she committed suicide to stop living the life of abomination.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 January 2019

The night she wore her bridal gown, and Britpop played and she committed suicide to stop livingthe life of abomination. sadness, life, death, celebration, hopes, wishes, dreams......... great poem. indeed dear Prabir. tony

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 27 January 2019

a very thoughtful story and beautiful title.

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