Love In Time Comments

A lovely poem dear poetess...loved it

My ten year one - I have met some of them + & - Great poem

Your son must have the intuition of a Poet's heart, Aside from being, very smart. Loved the last line, 'inside dying with pride' The mother's natural feeling and intuition, Of what to hide. A very different but quite memorable poem. Impressed.

wow! dawn. this is quite something from a ten-year old. and how true. in love is clarity. in love we taste eternity. i too would have made a poem out of his comment. -glen

Sweet feeling! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Stay blessed always. Greetings to your son.

Dawn, such a lovely poem...10++++

A sweet poem Dawn. What a feeling it must be to hear your 10 year old say those wonderful things to you. Lovely.