Friday, May 29, 2009

Love In The Rearview Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.6

Sitting in the back seat,
Seeing his eyes glancing
Right to left, as we drove along-
Side the grassy knolls.
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Lynn Glover 25 July 2010

A great write Almedia. I was drawn right into the back seat with you and watched as you wrote this poem about your love affair. Just great. Lynn

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Mark Nwagwu 14 April 2010

His dancing eyes held me So close that, I felt like a Trembling heart of a captive Bird held under his command. this is exquisitely lovely, shows the story of love is ever waiting to be told by lovers, and this is one such write that explodes from your pen finding a home in our hearts

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 March 2010

‘…When I saw his tender heart /Pulsating In his eyes….’ Wow! Aha …splendid imageries…and an offbeat poem… eye-reading in rear mirror…and immix with one’s passion in exaltation ecstasy … raptus… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Love romance are everywhere waiting to be 'picked-up'... n

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Shashendra Amalshan 14 October 2009

This is a very romantic poem indeed.. I felt like I was watching movie.. Very nice to read.. I like reading such works.. I mean, reading such ones always make my mind at ease.. This is great.. loves Shan

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Gorgeous imagery throughout this beautiful romantic and the 'eyes' did if for me. Love abounds and my heart did some flutters as I read it. 10 Karin Anderson

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