Sitting in the back seat,
Seeing his eyes glancing
Right to left, as we drove along-
Side the grassy knolls.
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His dancing eyes held me So close that, I felt like a Trembling heart of a captive Bird held under his command. this is exquisitely lovely, shows the story of love is ever waiting to be told by lovers, and this is one such write that explodes from your pen finding a home in our hearts
‘…When I saw his tender heart /Pulsating In his eyes….’ Wow! Aha …splendid imageries…and an offbeat poem… eye-reading in rear mirror…and immix with one’s passion in exaltation ecstasy … raptus… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Love romance are everywhere waiting to be 'picked-up'... n
This is a very romantic poem indeed.. I felt like I was watching movie.. Very nice to read.. I like reading such works.. I mean, reading such ones always make my mind at ease.. This is great.. loves Shan
Gorgeous imagery throughout this beautiful romantic and the 'eyes' did if for me. Love abounds and my heart did some flutters as I read it. 10 Karin Anderson
A great write Almedia. I was drawn right into the back seat with you and watched as you wrote this poem about your love affair. Just great. Lynn