Love In The Rains Comments

A magnificent poem sir! My favorite lines: A Cupid I see at a brewery/A moon is sleeping in her bed room/The sun has forgotten his chivalry/The moon is hidden beneath silky shawls/Stars are there as diamond jewelry. Beautifully composed......10/10

clay in love with clay /drunk /play in rain- multiple symbolism is admixed appears jumbling but poetically underpinned with a message, , fine

Beautiful loving poem on the rain; Rain the sweeper the stain of inside lovelorn heart Rain the pain killer from the loneliness mirth Rain the romantic carrier If lover and beloved enjoy it together

Awesome narrative thought. I can feel the rain sitting at my drawing rooms through your words. Beautifully written poem let me enjoy it with a cup of tea.10++ for making my day beautiful. And it's raining here too. 🙂