Saturday, April 27, 2013

Love In The Raindrops Comments

Rating: 4.4

Kingdom of the sky
Unlimited heart to bound
As heart of earth wait along the skyline
Though they never be touched in distance
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

The love among sky and earth is so immense and inevitable though they never meet. Clouds creates rain drops which hide tears as love kill fears. God is so creative. Thanks to him. Touchingly and hauntingly and astutely you have painted this poem with startling penmanship. Thanks. Full vote.

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 August 2017

How I love the rain in so many aspects....rain patter on flowers and my umbrella......the sound of rain on a tin roof when you are tucked up warm in bed....a cold rainy day sitting by the fire.....a brief warm summer shower on your skin at the beach.....walking in the rain when feeling blue.....invigorating...rejuvenating. Immerses the Soul...10+

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem Soul..Love is in each rain drop..Rain will hide your tears....Loved reading each lines.. Fantastic write like always..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 June 2013

After all A soul that to be unwritten thanks for this kind of lovely write with note though painful but you helped a lot

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

love is in each rain drop as it nourishes the earth. lovely write.

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Neela Nath Das 25 May 2013

Wash away tear with rain water.There's love in each raindrop.So beautiful diction! Soul, really it's stainless and pure as dawn.Amazing!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 May 2013

A very Soulful write indicating that There is love in each raindrop is heartening indeed! A miracle does exist, if soul is pure is a great thought which is highly captivating! The notes you've provided are an extentuation of your beautiful poem! Incredible write!

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Shahzia Batool 11 May 2013

Rain will hide your tears... the soul line! ! ! beautiful work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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R.j. Wynn 10 May 2013

Awesome poem, love it, hello

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Poetheart Morgan 04 May 2013

Hello Soul, i have not much to say because all poets did what i want to say! But you really have a Global and universal Soul! Peace friend.

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Patricia Grantham 04 May 2013

An unusually beautiful poem. The wording and poetry is really magnificent in context and creativity. I always loved the rain, it replenishes the earth and waters our soul. A very captivating read.

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Jahan Zeb 03 May 2013

very imaginative and suggestive. I liked the mature idea behind this piece. you have become a soul now. Nicely donne. Sorry for being late.

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Lyn Paul 30 April 2013

Truly loved the last verse. You are such a caring Soul and will touch many hearts through your long life. Thank You.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 April 2013

Raindrop, meta4 life, life in you in your concluding line though unwritten suffixed with soul, when one switch on the fan or appliances electricity(soul) it runs the machine body is the same...it is not off but on....the soul love u thank, nice

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Paul Brookes 29 April 2013

The rain has many blessings 'that bridges the heaven and earth' love is a blessing that rains on us if we're lucky. I hope is rains its blessings full hearted on you Beautiful write thanks for sharing. BB : O))

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Wahab Abdul 29 April 2013

wow, very lovely poem, very hard hitting and deep, like it..

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Nader Baheri 28 April 2013

unfourtunately i am not the first one who has read this wonderful poem although i tried. rain makes every thing better.its simple at the first place.a liquid water that is vaporized.and then when its cold and heavy enough it falls down under the gravity.thats like the love does.its a pure feeling vaporized from each heart then when the love accumulates gradually then it pours on each soul who greets it to be pured on. but this love is like a rainbow it needs both sun and rain so that all its colors be exposured.the rain makes the souls pure and the sun warms it and then an ever lasting love between two hearts gleams. i just imagine that big sun warms up two detatched souls.one of them may be dirty soul but one of them is pure.so what is vaporized is real love.then the love pours down again on those souls and make them both happy.who ever says that sun brings happiness has never danced in the rain.the souls dancing happily in the rain. so i agree completely with the ending of this poem and that is the best thing i can do whenever it rains is let it rain and open my heart to embrace an unseen love and hold it tight inside me. any way the forth part is really marvelous. i am the one who praise this poem and thanks alot.i voted 10+++++ ~nb

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Valerie Dohren 28 April 2013

Now I shall welcome the rain as a symbol of love - lovely write Soul.

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Spiritual Seeker 28 April 2013

I love rain..as a kid, we love to play in the rain...but sadly, as adults we avoided it. I like your line...rain will hide your tears! Beautiful write...thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 28 April 2013

everywhere we go with love. good write. thanks. we feel God in love.

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