Love In The Conditional Comments

A poignant poem of love. So beautifully crafted. Pains and disappointments are vividly conveyed. Well penned.10+++

Beautiful poem about love..well penned

Expressing true feelings in their natural effects, everyone can not do effectively. Articulating them in to a rhythmic pattern to make a poignant poem, should be still more difficult. You have done it fabulously well. Thanks Sandra for sharing. X

You're open heart/With my, forever/You're brilliant strains/That with love's melodies/Ran thru my veins.........Your disappointment is brilliantly reflected in this poignant piece of poetry! (10)

Sandra, such a well crafted expression of words....10++++