Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Love In The Afternoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

We made love in the afternoon
The warm sun radiating through curtains
Gently drawn
Bodies naturally warm and glowing
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Shaun William Hayes
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Sara Fielder 14 January 2012

Ah, cling to those now moments before you get to old to relish them anymore. What a great poem.

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William Jackson 17 August 2011

I liked your poem. Shelly, Keats, and to savor love in the afternoon. As William Blake said, 'The nakedness of woman is the work of God.'

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Shaun William Hayes

Shaun William Hayes

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