Love In Silence Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation written from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Jose.

I´ll be delighted to behold the starry night painted on the canvas of your eyes, The silver beam of the moonlight Reflected upon your face, The slight whisper of a sigh Escaping from your (flushing....do replace with another word lie blushing as flushing conveys down the drain in loos) lips. then the para will be lovelierly

to behold the starry night painted on the canvas of your eyes, The silver beam of the moonlight Reflected upon your face, ...... how so dearly poetic u are dear poet. love your poem. tony