Love In Dunes Comments

Hi Rini, Very romantic. The backdrop of the poem is set perfectly for creating the optimum effect of love and sensuality.. The tinge of sensuality added by proposing the camel ride is exquisite, fantastic. Congrats! ! !

Wow Rini, such a Romantic poem Liked the third line most

The poem is very romantic and it penned nicely.I salute your thought.Thank you for sharing this poem.

Romantic love scene has been painted nicely and touchingly. Thanks for sharing.

Oh how the wind sweeps the desert dunes, caressing every ripple, they are for lovers, a bed made for looking at the stars at night as they sing the songs of love and to cover from the sweltering heat during the day, wonderful poetry here, where some see death with the dunes, the poetess sees love! 10+++

Nice love story in a dryland where the scenic beauty is hardly there to see.10+

Nice love story in a dryland where the scenic beauty is hardly there to see.

very romantic charming and graphic... right out of a fairy tale in a teen girls cupboard... :) nice and fresh.... liked

Hi Rini, Wonderful poem on love. unique in its build. The vocabulary and the images conjure up a beautiful, but different world of unearthly love. : : : Stars twinkled in the sky Moon kissed the wavy sand: : Where are we? In the deserts? Or in heaven? The garden Eden? Lovely... A fantastic 100+ And onto mypoemslist, so I would read again.

love love love...love again...

Very beautiful and romantic love poem. A very wonderful poem to read.