Thursday, September 17, 2015

Love I Always Deserved Comments

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Having a chance to be with you in body and spirit has
given me the love I have always deserved in life.

Taking your heart into mine, letting it have it's way
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 17 September 2015

THE LOVE I'VE ALWAYS DESERVED - What a bold and proud, thoroughly honest and upbeat view of love. I'm mean PROUD in its ancient sense of being worthy, not hiding behind false modesty, but affirming the pride and love because they have been earned. I know the path that led you to such an open, forthright declaration. I know it from details of your life you have told me and from your poems which effortlessly carry this message. Only a life well-lived gives birth to such a poem. And I bet Tushar and his beloved Tagore will agree.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2015

Blessedness of love. Nice piece.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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