Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Love Hurts Sometimes Comments

Rating: 5.0

How could I be so stupid?
To not see this coming
To not believe the people around me
He showed me the world
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Carmen Johnson 21 April 2009

Poetry is reason and ryhme. IT does not have to ryhme to have reason. It can just be reason. And this had plenty of reason. Good write, your feelings come out clear and crisp. And dont let other people tell u otherwise.

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Nicholas Leisure 03 April 2009

so much pain and sadness, it made me think how mush u went though all that time was that really real... keep ur head up and do what you do best

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