Tuesday, December 16, 2014

Love Hurts Comments

Rating: 4.4

Staring and gazing at her
from across the room
he hopes that she sees
what keeps his body & soul
...
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Lubinda Lubinda
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Rose Kanana 06 September 2016

Hehehe great is the power of imagination.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2016

So, he gathers enough courage to asks her out on a date only to discover that; SHE SEES HIM JUST AS FRIEND AND NOTHING MORE THAN THAT! .. infatuation, attraction, imagination, desire. all that usually come up in a love, you have described in simple language. thank you very much dear poet for this poem. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2016

When the wrong thing is done. Thanks for sharing.

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Robby Makasa 04 October 2015

Amazing poem man...great stuff!

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Lubinda Lubinda 04 October 2015

Thanx, i really appreciate it!

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Saint Cynosure 19 December 2014

Tonight I am enjoying your words...

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Samuel Dickerson 16 December 2014

Because of how detailed this story is played out and how abrupt the conclusion was, I felt as if this story was told by the man.

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Heather Wilkins 16 December 2014

she seems to entice him with mixed signals but sees him as only a friend nice imagery but somewhat sad

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