Insert deep into my heart
Let the blood clot inside
This knife is meant for that
It is a gift from my sweetheart
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Unable to take it away! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing.
Amazing poem, Mohammed. None can hurt deeper than those we love. A 10+
Wowww. What an amazing depiction of love and betrayal. And the use of dagger as a symbol of pain is remarkably appropriate. Indeed, every loss and deceit hurts us like a dagger. Deserving no less than 10.
Superb... I am hanging it since then Unable to take it away, instant The last footprints on my heart Has left an image so dark (Report)
The pain n suffering of lost love is conveyed in beautiful poetic expression. Very well-conceived n well-crafted write.10