Saturday, October 1, 2016

Love Hurt Comments

Rating: 5.0

Insert deep into my heart
Let the blood clot inside
This knife is meant for that
It is a gift from my sweetheart
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nosheen Irfan 04 October 2016

The pain n suffering of lost love is conveyed in beautiful poetic expression. Very well-conceived n well-crafted write.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2016

Unable to take it away! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2016

A touching poem, nicely penned..................

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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2016

Amazing poem, Mohammed. None can hurt deeper than those we love. A 10+

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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2016

Wowww. What an amazing depiction of love and betrayal. And the use of dagger as a symbol of pain is remarkably appropriate. Indeed, every loss and deceit hurts us like a dagger. Deserving no less than 10.

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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2016

Superb... I am hanging it since then Unable to take it away, instant The last footprints on my heart Has left an image so dark (Report)

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