didn't you know......
love is made of iron......
didn't you know......
heart is made of glass......
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yes love is fragile...anything can happen when in love...its a wonderful poem and depics how fragile it can be when in a relationship...how you treat it can be intresting as well...well done..excellent work
Wow beautiful poem, outstanding, with a little lines you drew a unique picture full of different metaphors. Great work ma bro. :)
Very good. Lovely wording and great image to bring to mind. It is very nice.
I think, it's a rare imagination though it's a well-expressed thought in a short poem... I've many to say about love but a few words, ''Love is Divine! ''..
its so rare to express feelings and imaginations in such a short phrase...well done..please read and comment on my poem i wanted to paint, thanx
Ahmed, i can say about your 'love_heart...song' poem that you are on the right poetry way. I usually prefer the poems who contains concise lyrics so you are very close to my favorite poetry filed, sfere... good look!
First sir, thanks for the invite! It is a remarkable and striking poem. I myself like short poetry because it is thought provoking. I will add this to my favorites list. thanks again. call me J. L.
This is a very unique and amazing poem! So many things are said in just a few lines of this poem, definatly a poem to make you think. Beautiful!
Thanks for inviting me... It is from a strong heart that truly knows love... and very remarkably and effectively delivered... very good
This is an explosive piece of poetry. As soon as I took in the words, I could hear the glass shatter...magnificent!
Really like this. Showing that love is a fragile thing. Good poem.
Nice setting.. your works are great...