Thursday, September 6, 2012

Love=hatred Comments

Rating: 4.7

Everytime you see me don't you think why
I bring a subterfuge
To get away and find a place to refuge

Don't you ever think why
I havn't let you to reach in my deepest heart and i really get mad at myself
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nader baheri
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Unwritten Soul 11 February 2013

Love=Hatred never true unless Love Hate=Hatred...You missed one word there However i wonder how u really feel when you wrote this I feel like a cockroach wow its was a great to feel how cockroach walking and flying, and it feels LOL

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Eindaray Kyaw 13 September 2012

love =hatred? ? live for love? ? I have to choose one...i will choose the second one.. really nice poem.. nader! !

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Manauwer Raza 10 September 2012

Commendable work sir, theres always a situation when love turns to hatred, the good to bad, the beauty ugly... And that sort of unfortunate things... Just because whom we loved, never were ours... liked your flow of words and rhythm...

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Sina Farajzadeh 09 September 2012

Dammit! It's fantastic dis-love poem! I like it man. I usually don't like long poem, but this one is brilliant pal. Great.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 07 September 2012

Dear Nader, calm down man. life is full of these fake lovers who have no values in their lives. we just must be powerful and strong to get over them. this poem is perfect and nice well done dear Nader

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Unwritten Soul 07 September 2012

This poem has double sided meaning, to me reading this it can be really pain, it can be really touched...but the ultimate love is not equal to hatred...its like how we see the perspective of its shape, nice try..keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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