Thursday, August 20, 2020

Love,Hate And Life.... Comments

Rating: 4.9

Love - blossom in my heart,
fear flee like a dart.
Change, I hope will bring,
a new chapter in my life!
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 25 August 2020

DJ liked it. Flow is fine could have been little better had you added few more aspects however yur three points are well taken .

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Gordon Walter 23 August 2020

Three aspects of living beings nicely composed. 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2020

This is true that no one likes to welcome hate. Love blooms like beauty of perception of joy. Love interestingly conveys the happiness. Deep under the sea we grow much and initiate livelihood. This poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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S H 22 August 2020

Brilliantly penned. Terse and telling.10/10

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Sebastian G 20 August 2020

Wonderful poem. Short and sweet description.

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Anjandev Roy 20 August 2020

Life - I have admired......significant.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Michael Jack 20 August 2020

No regrets in the end is what we all strive for in life.

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Deepak S S 20 August 2020

Nicely composed poem on love, hate and life which includes death.10

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T Rajan Evol 20 August 2020

Wow so well written Love - blossom in my heart, fear flee like a dart. Change, I hope will bring, a new chapter in my life!

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Sharad Bhatia 20 August 2020

बहुत शानदार कविता, आभार आपका जिंदगी के सारे गुण /अवगुण दिखाने के लिए 100000+++4

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 August 2020

Life - I have admired your playful tricks and trials. I shall embrace the death, with happiness for rebirth......great write; expressive

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 August 2020

Love, hate n life the sum total of living. Life makes us taste all the emotions A beautiful poem from your pen.

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M. Asim Nehal

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