Wednesday, December 16, 2015

Love Has No Meaning To The Heartless Comments

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The world is full of cruel people that will lead you on,
Fake love for the fun of it under the golden sun,
Taking advantage of your mind, soul and heart,
Only to entertain themselves before they tear you apart,
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Daya Nandan
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Paul Sebastian 17 December 2015

You have painted a an accurate picture of a person who is a neouotic, lustful and one who is incapable of giving true love.It is how they lie and cheat to get what they want and then tear your heart into pieces for trusting them. Your poem provokes thinking. Good write.

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Kenneth Maswabi 16 December 2015

Magnificently captured. I like this poem.Thank you.

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