Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Love Had Gone Away Comments

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I saw you walking towards me
Grinning, smiling as if you knew me
With confidence you lend your hand
Asking me if you could be my man.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2016

so nice.. i liked...10 Seen again in He was not to be seen again As it had no importance to remain

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi 30 June 2016

I really liked this poem! The employment of the wind to capture what it looks like to fall in love at the first sight and feel the agony of being betrayed is really original. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us. You can have a look on my poems and feel free to comment. Wish you best of luck. hope we will be friends.

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