Love Grows Comments

At times, , love doesn't grow and one just has to move on but if there is even the slightest glimmer of hope, hold on tight and it will grow....You write so well of love......marci

'Goodbye and go', 'my own backyard', 'grass that's low', 'a gigantic row': these everyday, sometimes exaggerative images ('gigantic' for example) cleverly make the speaker's line of thinking appear child-like and unrealistic...which it is clearly anything but. Humour, cleverness and profound thinking all working together here. Nice work, Sylvia.