Tuesday, January 6, 2009

Love Gone Love Gone. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even In sleep the old man weeps,
his heartbeat a throb, love gone - love gone.
Each moment too long since he held her tight,
swaying heart to cheek to his favourite song.
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Ann Beard
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Deepak S S 07 July 2020

Nice poem on love, Enjoyed reading it.

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 January 2009

Thank you Ann. It almost seems as if you wrote this for me. It really touched my heart. You really understand. Love and pain. GW62

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Fay Slimm 17 January 2009

Another new fan for your poems Ann - - and so glad to have found this - - you have both metre and rhyme just right and the narrative pulls hard at the heartstrings of the reader....... a first for me with your work but certainly not the last.... look forward to reading more soon....... greetings from Fay...xx

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Absolutely delightful. Your composition a wonderful concept and the meter just sings to me. You know, free verse is the 'in' thing with lack of structure in society now, but bring back rhyme, and the discipline required to get through life. Excellent....I am so glad I found you Ann.....Karin Anderson

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Andrew Blakemore 12 January 2009

This is a wonderful write Ann, tender and deeply touching. Best wishes, Andrew

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Eddie Larkin 12 January 2009

I agree with Dream Catcher... a sad poem so beautifully written and it reminds me of when my mother died; my dad was quite ill at the time but he went three years after her, I think he couldn't wait to follow her!

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