Truth is beauty, and so is your poem, for it is faithfully true to truth. Though a sad poem, it might bring tears and smile together, particularly the lines: When love is no longer the story, You even forget your name. Cheers, my friend! 10/10.
Very touching and expressing very strong negative sentiments. However, one should not forget that a dawn of hope always follows the darkness of night. As a poem it is beautiful.10 points.
Love, in the regard of romantic relationships, takes too much of a toll when in trial. What a shame that chemicals in the brain dictate sadness despite our desire to be happy